
On Moonberry Lake by Holly Varni
Series: Moonberry Lake series, book 1
Publisher: Revell on September 26, 2023
REVIEW BY VERA DAY
Cora Matthews returns to her childhood hometown, Moonberry Lake, for the first time since she left at the age of seven. She never understood why there was a big upheaval in the family and why her mother whisked her away all those years ago.
I love the town of Moonberry Lake. Townsfolk are eccentric, but they have a strong sense of community. It’s not that they tolerate one another despite others’ eccentricities. It’s that people love one another and tolerate the eccentricities.
For a Christian fiction book, I’m surprised that the faith element isn’t more overt. The faith aspect is most prominent not in Cora’s neighbor who is a hospital chaplain but in Kitty, the grave keeper. And Kitty’s faith has a New Age vibe.
Perhaps Varni is so gentle or roundabout with the faith aspect so that the story won’t scare off seekers or people of faith who aren’t involved in a traditional Christian church. Kitty’s God is heartwarming and speaks to her (as does her late husband) and stirs her emotions. Cora has an emotional faith experience, too.
But in real life, faith isn’t always emotional. It can be dry, an analytical knowledge of and surrender to the Divine, but that doesn’t mean it’s any less real. I hope readers will be able to relate Cora’s faith journey even if their own experience is different.
The romance between Cora and her crush takes up only a small portion of the book, but it’s done well. Hearts pitterpatter, things progress slowly at a true-to-life pace. Whether or not they actually end up together is for the reader to find out.
Varni’s prose is easy to follow, paints some beautiful images, and contains plenty of pithy quotables like:
Pride can be a slow death to the spirit.
AND
Grief is a journey that keeps unfolding.
AND
Whatever embarrassment you’re carrying, realize that you’re the only one lugging it around.
Holly Varni, On Moonberry Lake
I truly enjoyed On Moonberry Lake, but it’s not perfect. I stumbled over some repetitious sentences, filtered descriptions, and sudden emotional swings that didn’t feel authentic in the context of the scene. Also, at the end I was hoping for an acknowledgement of characters introduced earlier in the book, whether their circumstances had settled or not. But I guess that just means I’ll have to read book two in the series.:-)
I cried happy tears. I laughed. I sighed with contentment. A character named Widgy is priceless, and her bald dog even more so. And don’t get me started on the town’s hilarious newspaper! Everybody who reads this book will want to move to Moonberry Lake.
Overall, I give On Moonberry Lake a wow-five for the setting and warm, affecting plot and a perfectly adequate three for the execution. Four fish overall!

I read On Moonberry Lake through NetGalley.
Wonderful, honest review. It’s hard finding the balance with Christian fiction. But you set the expectations just right, and you were sincere. It sounds like a fun weekend read, and I’ll have to look it up. Thank you Vera. 💙🙏
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Thank you for the kind words, Nigel. I’m glad Varni is going to make it into a series. I bet it’s going to be great!
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Thanks for your review, Vera. This line from your review made me curious: “For a Christian fiction book, I’m surprised that the faith element isn’t more overt.” I’m exploring the different ways authors can glorify God with their writing while not appearing preachy. I appreciate your insights!
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Yeah, Varni does a good job coming in from the edges with the faith element. Definitely not preachy. Thanks for commenting, Grant!
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In my research, I’m picking up some excellent techniques to avoid the dreaded Bible thumping. For example, the dialogue in James Scott Bell’s latest Mike Romeo Thriller draws contrasts between the world and timeless truths, often punctuated with a subtle reference to a verse. A thought provoker, even though subtle.
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Thanks for the rec of JSB’s book, Grant!
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Here’s an interesting comparison of two books by the same author. If you get the free Little Boy Lost book from Urcelia Teixeira’s website (https://www.urcelia.com/free-christian-fiction-books.html), compare it to her paid book Jacob’s Well, the former has a subtle yet obvious Christian theme. In contrast, Jacob’s Well is less subtle. One style is not right and the other wrong, just an interesting shift in technique. Both target readers who want a Christian message. What comes through on her website and newsletter is Urcelia’s absolute focus on honoring God through writing.
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This sounds like a good exercise. Teixeira was already on my TBR!
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It sounds as if this was a deeply affecting read, even if it has some technical issues – thank you for an interesting, thoughtful review:).
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Yes, memorable and emotional. I believe anyone who reads Varni’s book will want to move to Moonberry Lake! Thanks for your comment, SJ!
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Wonderful review Priscilla! I’m excited to read this one!📚💜
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You’ll enjoy it, Susan! Thanks for commenting.🙂
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Interesting and honest review and truly profound reflections💞
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Thank you, Luisa. Your comments are always treasured.
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As ever, you are most welcome! 🙏🌺
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Well written, Vera. I feel prepared for a go-nogo decision. I don’t think there are any towns left like this!
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Thank you, Jacqui.:-) I truly enjoyed the read even though I had my own issues with it.
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What a peaceful cover. Thank you for the insightful review, Vera 🙂
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Yes, the cover was the first thing that drew me in, and it fits the town! Thanks for your comment, Denise!
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I’m such a fan of quaint little towns with eccentric characters – I’d definitely want to move to Moonberry Lake. Adore that quote about embarrassment, lol!
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That quote is so true! Thanks for commenting, Teri!
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I always find it interesting when faith is definitely present in a book but is not the main element. I think you’re right – I think it might be done so that non-believers are more likely to encounter it in their daily lives without searching for it. I’m currently writing a book that has nothing to do with God [it’s a supernatural young adult book] but I still included a positive faith element even there because I always write believers into anything I write.
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I’m excited to hear you’re working on a book, Simone. I wish you all the best with it!
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Thank you 😊
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I love small town settings and I love the name, Moonberry Lake. Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this story, Vera.
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I love the title, too! Thanks for commenting, Jan.🙂
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I love the review and your request for tolerance from those traveling a different faith path. I think intolerance for most things has emerged as one of our major stumbling blocks. Well done, Vera.
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Thank you for your kind words, Pat.🙂 Varni put together a wonderful story and theme (and cover and title)!
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A very thoughtful review, Vera. I’ve read a few Christian fiction books that I found too preachy. I think I would like the subtleness found in this book. I love small towns and Moonberry Lake sounds like a place I would want to visit (or live).
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The town is so appealing. If you read the book, you’ll want to move there, Joan!
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I like the quote about the embarrassment – so true 🙂 . Great review, Vera!
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Yup, totally true. Thanks for reading and commenting, Valinora!
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It seems like an interesting book. I loved your well written, engaging and honest review.
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Thanks, Thomas. I did enjoy the read. I bet a lot of other people will too!
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I love the name of the town. Moonberry Lake sounds like a place I would love to visit, if not live. An enchanting review, Vera!
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Thanks, Mae.:-) “Enchanting” is a good way to describe Moonberry Lake!
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Small town settings are my favorite. Thanks for sharing your review, Vera!
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Hi Jill! You would enjoy this book, then. Moonberry Lake is an adorable small town!
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This sounds charming. You’ve piqued my interest!! Adding it to my Christmas list, thank you!!
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Hi Kristi! Yes, it is a charming story. Thanks for commenting!
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I love the descriptions. I think I’d like to visit the town. Maybe for the newspaper alone! Thanks, Vera.
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Haha, yeah, the newspaper is great. Thanks for commenting, Staci.🙂
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You have a gift for book reviews, Vera! Moonberry Lake seems to be calling me.
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Thank you, Crystal.🙂 I think Moonberry Lake is a town that would call to a lot of people!
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I do love a story that gives us an idyllic if fictional town to visit. Great review, Vera!
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Thanks, Sean.🙂 I agree, a good setting like Moonberry Lake makes the story more fun to read.
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Hi Vera, I like the quotes very much. This book seems very well written.
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Hi Robbie, Varni does have a lot of quotable bits.🙂 Thanks for commenting!
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This sounds like a delightful read, and the lighter touch on Christianity would work for me, particularly if it’s reflective of the characters’ individuality. I like quirky characters and towns, and the read seems to have some of that. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and recommendation. 🙂
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I just took a peek at the accumulating online reviews. It seems a lot of people like Varni’s quirky, little town. Thanks for commenting, Diana!
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It’s very true about everyone’s experience with faith being quite different and it might work better for some people in this form than for others! And I love a nice small town vibe in a book. It can feel so wholesome sometimes.
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“Wholesome” is a good way to describe the town Varni created. Her characters are really fun, too. Thanks for commenting, Olivia-Savannah!
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Sounds like a fun read. Your description of the story reminds me in some ways of a Carolyn Brown book. Thank you for another interesting review.
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It was a fun read, Marie! Yes, I can the similarities with a Carolyn Brown book. Thanks for your comment.🙂
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Another nice review, Vera. You have a lot of comments on this post, other people must have thought the same thing. I love your honesty. It is so hard to write an honest review – I don’t like to hurt feelings, yet honest writing is more helpful that platitudes, right?
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Thanks for your kind words, Marsha. It was a hard review to write because I still enjoyed the book and loved the setting. It’s just that I was uncomfortable with the theology and stumbled here and there over the style of writing. I hope you’re having a fab weekend!
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An interesting one, for sure. I’m reading lots of Story Chat comments.
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