On Moonberry Lake by Holly Varni

On Moonberry Lake by Holly Varni
Series: Moonberry Lake series, book 1
Publisher: Revell on September 26, 2023

REVIEW BY VERA DAY

Cora Matthews returns to her childhood hometown, Moonberry Lake, for the first time since she left at the age of seven. She never understood why there was a big upheaval in the family and why her mother whisked her away all those years ago.

I love the town of Moonberry Lake. Townsfolk are eccentric, but they have a strong sense of community. It’s not that they tolerate one another despite others’ eccentricities. It’s that people love one another and tolerate the eccentricities.

For a Christian fiction book, I’m surprised that the faith element isn’t more overt. The faith aspect is most prominent not in Cora’s neighbor who is a hospital chaplain but in Kitty, the grave keeper. And Kitty’s faith has a New Age vibe.

Perhaps Varni is so gentle or roundabout with the faith aspect so that the story won’t scare off seekers or people of faith who aren’t involved in a traditional Christian church. Kitty’s God is heartwarming and speaks to her (as does her late husband) and stirs her emotions. Cora has an emotional faith experience, too.

But in real life, faith isn’t always emotional. It can be dry, an analytical knowledge of and surrender to the Divine, but that doesn’t mean it’s any less real. I hope readers will be able to relate Cora’s faith journey even if their own experience is different.

The romance between Cora and her crush takes up only a small portion of the book, but it’s done well. Hearts pitterpatter, things progress slowly at a true-to-life pace. Whether or not they actually end up together is for the reader to find out.

Varni’s prose is easy to follow, paints some beautiful images, and contains plenty of pithy quotables like:

Pride can be a slow death to the spirit.

AND

Grief is a journey that keeps unfolding.

AND

Whatever embarrassment you’re carrying, realize that you’re the only one lugging it around.

Holly Varni, On Moonberry Lake

I truly enjoyed On Moonberry Lake, but it’s not perfect. I stumbled over some repetitious sentences, filtered descriptions, and sudden emotional swings that didn’t feel authentic in the context of the scene. Also, at the end I was hoping for an acknowledgement of characters introduced earlier in the book, whether their circumstances had settled or not. But I guess that just means I’ll have to read book two in the series.:-)

I cried happy tears. I laughed. I sighed with contentment. A character named Widgy is priceless, and her bald dog even more so. And don’t get me started on the town’s hilarious newspaper! Everybody who reads this book will want to move to Moonberry Lake.

Overall, I give On Moonberry Lake a wow-five for the setting and warm, affecting plot and a perfectly adequate three for the execution. Four fish overall!

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I read On Moonberry Lake through NetGalley.

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  1. Wonderful, honest review. It’s hard finding the balance with Christian fiction. But you set the expectations just right, and you were sincere. It sounds like a fun weekend read, and I’ll have to look it up. Thank you Vera. 💙🙏

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  2. Thanks for your review, Vera. This line from your review made me curious: “For a Christian fiction book, I’m surprised that the faith element isn’t more overt.” I’m exploring the different ways authors can glorify God with their writing while not appearing preachy. I appreciate your insights!

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      1. In my research, I’m picking up some excellent techniques to avoid the dreaded Bible thumping. For example, the dialogue in James Scott Bell’s latest Mike Romeo Thriller draws contrasts between the world and timeless truths, often punctuated with a subtle reference to a verse. A thought provoker, even though subtle.

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          1. Here’s an interesting comparison of two books by the same author. If you get the free Little Boy Lost book from Urcelia Teixeira’s website (https://www.urcelia.com/free-christian-fiction-books.html), compare it to her paid book Jacob’s Well, the former has a subtle yet obvious Christian theme. In contrast, Jacob’s Well is less subtle. One style is not right and the other wrong, just an interesting shift in technique. Both target readers who want a Christian message. What comes through on her website and newsletter is Urcelia’s absolute focus on honoring God through writing.

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  3. I always find it interesting when faith is definitely present in a book but is not the main element. I think you’re right – I think it might be done so that non-believers are more likely to encounter it in their daily lives without searching for it. I’m currently writing a book that has nothing to do with God [it’s a supernatural young adult book] but I still included a positive faith element even there because I always write believers into anything I write.

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  4. A very thoughtful review, Vera. I’ve read a few Christian fiction books that I found too preachy. I think I would like the subtleness found in this book. I love small towns and Moonberry Lake sounds like a place I would want to visit (or live).

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  5. This sounds like a delightful read, and the lighter touch on Christianity would work for me, particularly if it’s reflective of the characters’ individuality. I like quirky characters and towns, and the read seems to have some of that. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and recommendation. 🙂

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  6. It’s very true about everyone’s experience with faith being quite different and it might work better for some people in this form than for others! And I love a nice small town vibe in a book. It can feel so wholesome sometimes.

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  7. Sounds like a fun read. Your description of the story reminds me in some ways of a Carolyn Brown book. Thank you for another interesting review.

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  8. Another nice review, Vera. You have a lot of comments on this post, other people must have thought the same thing. I love your honesty. It is so hard to write an honest review – I don’t like to hurt feelings, yet honest writing is more helpful that platitudes, right?

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    1. Thanks for your kind words, Marsha. It was a hard review to write because I still enjoyed the book and loved the setting. It’s just that I was uncomfortable with the theology and stumbled here and there over the style of writing. I hope you’re having a fab weekend!

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