
Unexpected Witness by Penny Zeller
Book 1 of 3 Mountain Justice
Publisher: Maplebrook Publishing, October 22, 2024
REVIEW BY GWEN M. PLANO
In this Christian Suspense novel, nurse Mila Casey completes her shift at the local hospital and walks to her car in the employee parking lot. She notices some peculiar behavior, draws closer, and then witnesses a deadly attack. The murderer catches sight of her and tries to kill her as well.
Mila calls for help, but her actions put her in greater danger. She gets into her car, heads away from the scene, only to realize that she is being chased. In this terrifying predicament, she drives to the sheriff’s department. Once the sheriff understands the situation, he deploys the police and puts Mila in Witness Protection. But even with this protective action, the murderer and his buddies repeatedly locate her. The young nurse lives in constant fear for her life, unable to trust friends or officials. The tension mounts as the evidence slowly reveals a dangerous web of connections. Mila is finally hidden away on the sheriff’s family ranch, and slowly a relationship develops between her and the sheriff’s brother, Roarke. This love interest continues to play an important role throughout the story.
“Mom would remind him he could make all the plans he wanted, but the Lord directed his steps.”
“…serving others and being there for them are two ways we can show the love of Christ.”
Unexpected Witness, Penny Zeller
I liked the characters in this novel. They were relatable and enduring. Similarly, the setting was one I could easily envision. Both of these points underscore Zeller’s writing skill. The faith elements were scattered throughout the novel and included whispered prayers and occasional references to scripture. More than anything, the actions of the characters reflected their faith, as they were rooted in trust in God.
There were a few situations that I found to be a bit of a stretch, and the romantic elements were predictable. But this was fiction, and frankly, I appreciated the evolution of the story – expected or not.
I give Unexpected Witness four and a half well-deserved fish.

I purchased the Kindle version of Unexpected Witness through Amazon.
Just your description of the book got my heart rate up. I was already hoping Mila would outrun the bad guy from the parking lot! This sounds like an exciting story with the added bonus of a romantic subplot. Tempting review, Gwen!
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I enjoyed the pace and the undercurrents of faith, goodwill, and romance. Thank you, Priscilla, for sharing as you have.
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Sounds like a story I’d really enjoy, and I’d never heard of this author, so I doubly appreciate this review because now I can add another to my list. Thanks, Gwen.
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I had never heard of her either, Staci. I’m continually surprised by the vastness of Christian-based writers. Thank you for sharing.
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Interesting review that shows an atypical plot line.
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“Atypical” is a good descriptive word for the plot line. Thank you!
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Thrilled you enjoyed it.
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Such a life-changing experience. Kudos to the character for upturning her life to do the right thing. I’m intrigued!
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Thank you, Jacqui. I liked Mila and cheered her choices.
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Great review, Gwen 🙂 Added to my reading list
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Thank you, Denise. If it reaches the top of your list, I hope you enjoy it.
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Thanks for sharing your thoughts on this book, Gwen. Even though parts were predictable, it sounds like a good read!
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Thank you, Jan. Yes, it kept my attention throughout with a great pace.
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This sounds like a book I would enjoy. I’ve read another Penny Zeller book. but it was in a different series. Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Gwen.
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Thank you, Joan. This was a first for me, and I’m glad I decided to take the plunge.
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That’s a terrifying situation! No matter where she hides, they find her. This sounds like an edge of your seat read, Gwen – nice review!
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Hi Teri! Gwen slipped out of town to be with family, so I’m stepping in. Yes, the plot does sound like a scary situation. It would make me totally paranoid! Thanks for reading Gwen’s review and commenting.❤
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Hi Gwen, you have a good eye for great books. Thanks for this review.
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Hi Robbie! Gwen slipped out of town to be with family, so I’m stepping in. I agree, Gwen has a way of finding great books. Thanks for reading her review and leaving a comment.❤
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Pretty cover!
I love that quote. It really grounds us in God’s truth. Thanks so much for the review, Gwen!
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Hi KC! Gwen slipped out of town to be with family, so I’m popping in here. I love the quote she pulled too. Thanks for reading Gwen’s review and commenting.❤
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Thanks to Gwen for an excellent review. The situation sounds interesting although I am not sure about the romantic elements. I’ll think about it.
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Hi Olga, Gwen is out of town with family, so I’m sneaking in here to respond to comments. I don’t always enjoy reading romance, either, but Gwen’s review made the suspense elements sound so exciting! Thanks for reading Gwen’s review and commenting.🙂
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