Forgotten Identity by Penny Zeller

Forgotten Identity by Penny Zeller
Stand Alone Novel
Publisher: Maplebook Publishing, January 14, 2025

REVIEW BY JOAN HALL

Mariah Holzmann is a single mom, raising and homeschooling her two children. She works from home as an editor for a Christian publishing company and lives in a remote mountain town with her mother. When the family dog, Nosy, escapes one snowy evening (something not unusual for him), Mariah and her young son rush to locate him before a blizzard hits.

She gets more than she bargained for when Nosy spots a man lying in the snow. He’s unconscious, is badly wounded, and has hypothermia. Mariah can’t leave him in the sub-freezing temperatures to die, so she drags him back to the house. Her mother’s nursing skills come in handy because the storm has knocked out their cell phone and internet service. Impassible roads and extreme weather make it impossible to seek outside help.

Together, the two women care for him as best they can. Not only did he suffer a traumatic brain injury, multiple contusions, and broken ribs, but also stab wounds.

When the man regains consciousness, he has no memory. Can’t remember his name or what type of person he was. When he begins to have flashbacks of an encounter with the law, he begins to question if he’s not part of a gang or is a drug dealer.

But during his time in Mariah’s home, the two of them begin to have feelings for one another. Mariah refuses to become involved with someone like George (the nickname given to him by her children).

Things escalate when several unscrupulous people come to the cabin in search of him. Mariah manages to keep him hidden, but she refuses to do anything that will put her family in danger. George does not want to endanger them either, and he prays he isn’t a criminal.

The storyline is interesting, and Mariah’s strong faith helps her through the situation.

“Bible verses jumbled through her mind, including her favorite from Isaiah 41:10. She muttered it aloud, the words sounding incoherent in her own ears. ‘Fear not for I am with you…'”
-Penny Zeller, Forgotten Identity

I did have a few issues with this book. At times, the pace seemed a bit slow, but it picked up toward the end. There were also numerous echoes, for instance, the use of the word “wheelchair” multiple times within a few pages as well as repeated phrases. A good editor should have caught these obvious mistakes. Otherwise, the book was an enjoyable read.

I give Forgotten Identity three and a half fish for the reasons listed above.

image of three and a half drawn fish by British Museum on unsplash

I read Forgotten Identity through Amazon Kindle Unlimited.

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    1. Hi Grant, I took a look at Zeller’s Amazon page. You made an interesting observation–so many books and so many great reviews. I think this may be a matter of reading styles (because we each have our own preferences). Like maybe a lot of readers get so wrapped up in Zeller’s plots that they don’t notice the writing/editing styles.

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      1. I agree, Priscilla. I became more aware of things like this since I began writing. (And echoes are the bane of my existence. Wish I could catch them in my own work.)

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  1. Your description of the plot totally hooked me! It’s too bad that the writing style (or editing misses) was distracting. I think this is a great review, Joan, as it comes across as enticing but not gratuitous.

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  2. Thanks for the honest review, Joan. It sounds like the book has much potential, but perhaps needed a bit more nurturing before being released to the world.
    I love the dog’s name, and I’m really curious about “George’s” true identity, although I will likely give this one a pass.

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    1. I pretty much figured it out, Mae, but I confess there are times I wanted to give up on this one. The book had a lot of potential, I could have easily rated it four or four and a half if not for those mistakes.

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  3. Echoes are the bane of my existence as a writer. Also as a reader, though I don’t always see/hear them. If I notice them, they must be pretty bad. I find that distracting, so I understand why you deleted fish. Otherwise, this sounds like a good story. Thanks for sharing, Joan.

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  4. Great review! I’ve read one of Penny’s books and really enjoyed it. I have this one on my to-read list. Sad that the editor didn’t catch the repetition.

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    1. I tend to catch those things because they are prevalent in my first drafts (too bad I don’t catch my own, but I’m grateful for my critique partners). Thanks for leaving a comment, Michelle. People say a lot of good things about Penny’s books.

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  5. Penny sent me an ARC of this book and I ABSOLUTELY ADORED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love how she put together the mystery and had each character get their own INCREDIBLE character arc. “George” and Mariah are SUCH a cute couple, and I ESPECIALLY enjoyed watching “George” interact with Mariah’s kiddos (it was SO STINKIN’ CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!).

    I enjoy historical fiction and occasionally read contemporary, but they usually aren’t comfort reads for me. Unless Penny writes them. I don’t know HOW she manages to do it, but her books just make me feel so much better when I’m upset. She’ll always be one of my favorites, and I can’t WAIT to read more of hers!!!!!!!!!

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    1. Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Courtney. I enjoyed the story line, and yes, George’s interaction with the children. If I could just turn off my internal editor.

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