
Rage Against the Machine by H. Meadow Hopewell
Series: Book One in the The Given Path trilogy
Publisher: Elk Lake Publishing, Inc. (November 21, 2024)
REVIEW BY PRISCILLA BETTIS
This is a Christian science-fiction thriller that takes place in the near future. It’s set in New York City, Melbourne, Australia, and Canada. The main character, Roare Murdock, is an Oscar-winning director of documentary films.
Roare learns that people with an evil agenda will use AI against humans. Hopewell, through Roare, is quick to point out the benefits of AI like articulate artificial limbs, food production in insecure food areas, use in surgical procedures, etc. (My own sister was operated on by a robot with real-time AI input.) Roare is asked to make a documentary exposing the bad guys’ use of AI (which of course puts her in danger).
Turns out someone she knows is an AI-enhanced human. You can understand why she freaks a little when he reveals the truth:
He wandered into the living area and stuffed his hands in his pants pockets. Finally, he stopped with his back to her and stared toward the kitchen. “I was turned into a superhuman weapon, a monster who can seek out enemies and destroy them with waves of various frequencies using my eyes.”
-H. Meadow Hopewell, Rage Against the Machine
Hopewell doesn’t shy away from incorporating spirituality into the narrative. We read characters’ prayers. We witness God’s direct words to several characters. There are angels who intervene in dangerous circumstances. There’s a prophetess. Characters get messages through dreams. At first, all this was too far-fetched for me. Then I recalled in the book of Acts that in the last days God will pour out His Spirit, people will prophesy and get visions, and old people will dream.
However, despite the fun I had reading this book, the writing style didn’t jibe with my reading style. Conversations between characters include on-the-nose dialogue and overwritten speech (three sentences that basically say the same thing when one sentence of dialogue would do … just like how we get wordy in real life!). Also, one of the characters gets melodramatic at the end. So I took off one-and-a-half fish, but my complaints won’t bother other readers who like true-to-life dialogue and a little drama.
At the end, Hopewell skillfully wraps up the current storyline but reveals the mechanisms of the bad guys, leaving the reader with a sense of doom that can only be alleviated by reading the next book.:-)
Although this wasn’t the perfect story for me, I wouldn’t hesitate to read more from Hopewell.
p.s. Can we just notice the fantastic cover art for a sec? It fits the storyline and genre perfectly. Kudos to cover designer Kelly Artieri.
p.p.s. Inside, the chapter titles have a futuristic font, and the scene breaks are stylized DNA sketches thanks to interior designer Deb Haggerty. So cool!
I award Rage Against the Machine an entertaining 3.5 fish!

I read the Kindle Unlimited version of Rage Against the Machine.
Thanks for the excellent review, Priscilla! I appreciate your reasons for lowering the overall rating, yet you would read another by Hopewell. That suggests to me the quality of the story trumped the mechanical issues of the storytelling. The Christian Science Fiction genre remains a wide open opportunity for writers who have a passion for these stories. I’m eager to read this book, exploring whether certain writing tools or techniques might have helped garner a higher rating.
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I agree about the Christian Science Fiction genre being a big opportunity for writers. I look for them, but they are hard to find, especially adult science fiction. Thanks for your thoughtful comment, Grant.🙂
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As you come across new CSF writers, please let us know. I’m especially interested in quality writers Jamie Lee Gray, giving readers fast-paced stories with multi-POV and well-developed characters.
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Will do!
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Thank you for a superb review which informs me that despite the awesome cover – and you’re right, it’s outstanding!! – I’ll be giving this one a pass. I’m quite happy with the intervention of holy, otherworldly beings, but I can’t abide overwritten dialogue. Yes, we ramble in real life and frequently repeat ourselves but it doesn’t half silt up the narrative pace in a story!
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“Silt up”–I can tell you’re a writer, S.J.😂 Thanks for the kind words about my review, and I hope you have a wonderful rest of your Wednesday!❤
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Another thoughtful review, Priscilla. I’ve not read anything by Hopewell, so this is very helpful. Thank you!
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The first thing I thought when I saw “H. Meadow Hopewell” (besides me not having heard of her, either), was that she had a beautiful name. This is her debut novel. Even though this first novel is imperfect, I think she has a wonderful writing career ahead of her. Thanks for your comment, Gwen.❤
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Thanks for your honest review, Priscilla. I’ll give this one a pass, however. Just not my cup of tea. And the overwritten dialogue is a big turn off for me. Yes, I know we talk that way, but still…
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We all have our reading preferences. I like science fiction, but I understand how it’s not everyone’s cup of tea. Thank you for reading my review and commenting, Joan.❤
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I agree with you, the cover is gorgeous. Although sci-fi “isn’t my “jam” as one of my younger book club members said last month about our contemporary romance selection, I love that you would return to this author despite issues with the storytelling. I’m not always that fair to the authors I read, and I probably should be. Thanks for taking the time to write such an honest and fair review.
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Hi Kelly! Yeah, there are genres that aren’t “my jam,” but in this case, I enjoy a good science fiction story. I’m already looking forward to book 2 in the trilogy. Thanks for your comment.❤
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Interesting premise. Nice cover.
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It is an interesting premise. I can envision this story playing out on the big screen. Thanks for commenting, KC!❤
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I love that you took the time to notice (and compliment) the cover artist and interior designer.
This is the type of story that appeals to me, but I’m a bit of a dialog snob and fear the overwriting and melodrama would annoy me. I’m going to think about this one.
Thanks for the candid and thoughtful review, Priscilla.
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And thank you, Staci, for reading my review and commenting.❤ I enjoyed this first book of the trilogy even though it wasn’t perfect. I trust the second book will be more skillfully written. 👍
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A how-to on writing a 3.5/5 review. Those are so difficult and I enjoyed yours, appreciated I might enjoy this book despite the flaws you saw.
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Aw, thanks for the kind words, Jacqui. I’m looking forward to book two and trust it’ll be more skillfully written. Have a super rest of your week.❤
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When I first saw the title I wondered if this was a book about the rock band by the same name, lol. I like the premise, cover, and the idea of the stylized DNA chapter headers, but I’d probably have the same issues you did. I’ve also read books by authors that didn’t really work for me, but then I enjoyed some of their other works. Great review, Priscilla!
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It’s kind of an ironic title because there is an antiauthoritarian movement in this story, but it’s not at all of the same type as the polemic rock band took part in. Thanks for commenting, Teri!❤
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What an interesting mesh of genres. Sounds like a good story despite the writing style. Thanks for sharing, Priscilla.
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Yes, it’s an interesting story despite not meshing with my reading style. I suspect the next book will be more skillfully written now that Hopewell has this first one under her belt. Thanks for your comment, Jan!❤
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Yes, the cover art is fantastic.
Thanks for sharing you review!
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Yeah, Hopewell scored on the cover art and the interior design. Thanks for commenting, Jackie!❤
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Although I enjoy science-fiction from time to time, I’m not sure this book would work for me, given the AI focus. You wrote an excellent review with pros and cons, Priscilla. Those aren’t easy to do. Thanks for the honest viewpoint–and I love that you took time to note the cover and interior design features. 🙂
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Thanks for the kind words about my review, Mae. I enjoyed the story even though the writing style didn’t mesh with my reading style. Since this is Hopewell’s debut, I suspect her second book will be more skillfully written. I’m glad you commented.❤
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Love the title, review, and cover, Priscilla.
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Thanks, Pat! I look forward to reading the second book in the series even though this first book was not all I hoped it to be. Have a great rest of your evening!❤
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Wonderful, balanced and honest review, Priscilla. I don’t read a lot of Science Fiction and I am afraid of what AI will and can do in the future. That means that I want to read this one, just to see where the author takes it. I get frustrated with overwritten speech, but you must have liked this one enough despite the issues you had.
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Thanks for the kind words about my review, Carla. AI scares me, too. Yes, I liked this first book in the series enough that I want to read the second one. I’m glad you commented.❤
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Great review, as always! This book sounds truly unique. I appreciate your reasoning for lowering the score. 🙂
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Unique, yes! It’s kind of hard to find contemporary adult Christian science fiction, so I applaud Hopewell for diving into the genre. It wasn’t a perfect read for me, but it was still entertaining. Thanks for the kind words about my review, and thanks for commenting, Nicole.❤
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Great review, Priscilla:) I love the theme of the story!
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Hi Denise! Thanks for the compliment regarding my review.🙂 I love the theme of this story, too. I wonder where Hopewell will take it in the second book… Have a great rest of your week!❤
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I found your review really fascinating, dear Priscilla!
Thanks a lor for sharing ❣️🤗❣️
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Thank you for your kind words, Luisa. I always look forward to your comments.❤
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You’re most welcome, my dear Priscilla! 🙏💙
Your kind words truly mean a lot to me
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I’m not a science fiction reader, but it sounds like a good read, and yes, love the cover!! Great review, Priscilla.
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Thanks, KC! I’m looking forward to book 2. Have a great weekend!❤
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AI is very topical. This sounds like an interesting book. Thanks for the review, Priscilla.
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Agreed, AI is very topical. I like how Hopewell puts a spin on it, but of course I can’t say exactly where she took the story or I’d spoil it. But it’s a nice setup for book two. Have a great weekend, Robbie.❤
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Thank you, Priscilla, you too
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Thanks for your review, Priscilla. I think the issues you had with the book would probably put me off as well, although I agree that the cover and the inside art sounds amazing, and the author seems to push the story beyond the typical. Enjoy the weekend.
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Yes, Hopewell pushed the plot beyond the typical, and I loved that. It makes me interested in reading the next book in the series despite my issues with this book. I hope you’re having a great weekend, Olga!❤
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You’re so right about the cover, Priscilla. It’s very sci-fi and very gorgeous! The story sounds interesting – that combo of AI and faith are so opposite in some ways. I suspect we’ll be seeing more AI in future stories since it has the potential for great good and great evil. Thanks for the review!
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Yes, great potential for good OR evil! Thanks for your comment, Diana, and have a wonderful rest of your weekend!❤
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I love the cover too. Great artwork. The premise is timely, considering the uptick in AI in everything. Sounds like an interesting read. I can overlook a few flaws if the story holds my interest. Thanks for the review!
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Yes, a few flaws, but the story was interesting enough that I’m looking forward to book 2. Thanks for commenting, Marie, and I hope you’re having a great weekend! ❤
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Well said! I like the way you wrote the review, the honesty.
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Thanks, Lena.❤ I did have some problems with the book, but it’s Hopewell’s debut novel, and for a debut, it’s pretty impressive. I think she’s got an exciting writing journey ahead of her.
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I think a writer’s debut novel is probably the hardest one to write, because you want it to be perfect, or at least close to perfection. With each one after that, you want the same perfection, but it’s different because you gain confidence. Thank you for your wonderful insight on the book, Vera
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I’m so sorry! I mean thank you Priscilla!
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LOL, no problem!
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I agree, Lena!
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Great cover! Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I may have to check out the fantasy genre.
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Hi Gail, thanks for reading my review. Yes, the cover is fantastic. Have a super rest of your weekend!🙂
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Thanks, Priscilla. Meant to say sci-fi. Ha! Busy time. 😁
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