
Cottage By The Sea by Robin Jones Gunn
Hideaway Series Book Three
Publisher: Howard Books July 3, 2012
REVIEW BY JOAN HALL
Cottage By The Sea was one of my BookBub recommendations a few months ago, so I picked up a copy while it was on sale. It was my first time reading any work by Robin Jones Gunn.
Erin Bryce and her best friend Sharlene have just opened their wedding planning business, “The Happiest Day,” initially working out of Erin’s home. As she is preparing to leave for a meeting with their first client, she receives a call from her stepmother saying her father has had a stroke. He had moved from California to the coast of Oregon after the death of Erin’s mother.
Torn between her new business partnership, and the need to see her father, with whom she didn’t have a good relationship, Erin is uncertain of what to do. Encouraged by Sharlene, she books a flight to Oregon to visit her father in the little “Cottage by the Sea.”
Erin’s stepmother, Delores, is standoffish, and her relationship with her father doesn’t improve in the short time she was there.
Eighteen months have passed when Erin receives another call from Delores saying her father’s condition is terminal. She and her husband, Mike, make the journey to Oregon. When Delores walks out, Erin decides to stay for the last few weeks (or months) of her father’s life. This puts a strain on her business and her relationship with Sharlene.
I have mixed feelings about this book. The overall theme is forgiveness, and I thought the emotions Erin felt were very real. Not only does she need to forgive her father, but her stepmother as well. Plus, she wants the relationship with her father and brother (who lives in Hawaii) to be mended before it’s too late. Erin’s character arc is believable.
What Erin heard in the silence was that there were, indeed, specific answers to each earthly pain. Every “why” had a “so that” response written by God himself.
Robin Jones Gunn, Cottage By The Sea
However, I had some issues with the author’s writing. There were numerous repetitions of words within paragraphs. In most cases, these could have been easily avoided, and the word eliminated altogether without losing its meaning. For a traditionally published book, I would have thought a good editor would have caught these things.
The book ends with an upbeat note that makes the reader feel good. Without giving any details, I’ll say that it’s nice to have things resolved, but I also know life and our circumstances don’t always turn out rosy or in the way we want.
I give this book three and a half fish.

I purchased a copy of Cottage By The Sea through Amazon.
I’ve only partly read one book by this author, which I found hard to read too. Thanks for this review, Joan. I doubt I’ll read another from her.
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Thanks for sharing your thoughts, KC. I doubt I’ll read any other books by her. That you found another book difficult to read says a lot.
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Thank you for your honest review, Joan. I’ve not read anything by Robin Jones Gunn, but I just noticed that she’s written over a hundred books. How is that even possible without sacrificing quality? Thank you again.
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That puzzles me as well, Gwen. And the publishing company is part of a well-known one (can’t recall just now which one).
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“When Delores walks out …” What a slimy thing for Delores to do when her husband is on his death bed! Anyway, echo-words within paragraphs bother me, too, but the story sounds compelling, and it’s available on Kindle Unlimited, so I might give it a go. Thanks for sharing your thoughts on this book, Joan!
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It is a compelling story, Priscilla. I love Kindle Unlimited. If a book isn’t to a reader’s linking, at least they haven’t spent any money.
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Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Joan, on a Cottage by the Sea. I’ve never read any books by this author. Word repetition within paragraphs is really surprising. The author or editor should’ve caught that, especially if it’s a recurring offense. Not sure this one is my cup of tea.
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I can’t imagine an editor not catching them, Kelly. If it had happened only once or twice, I can overlook them. But they occurred throughout the book. Hard not to notice.
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This sounds good, a common plot and theme, so I’d have to be inspired by some uncommon twist.
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It is pretty common, Jacqui. After I read the book, several reviewers commented that it wasn’t her best work.
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Thank you for sharing an honest review of this book, Joan. I’d be curious to know if this was a debut novel for this author due to the writing missteps you mentioned. But the story sounds good.
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I don’t believe it was her debut novel, Jan. (I cringe to think of how many repeats are in my early books.) I enjoyed the story, but those constant mistakes were distracting.
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I just went and looked and she has several books out. This book has 219 reviews on Amazon with over 800 on Goodreads. I shake my head sometimes.
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Me too, Jan.
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Thanks for the honest review, Joan. I think I’ll have to pass on this one. The echoes alone would drive me mad.
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You know I struggle with them in my own writing, so I’m probably more aware of them in other works. Doubt I’d read anything else by this author.
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I appreciate you sharing an honest review, Joan. I always cringe when I see a repeat in my work.
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I’m the world’s worst. Fortunately, my critique partners catch a lot of them.
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I like the theme of forgiveness, but I’m not sure the way it’s delivered via the plot as described would draw me in. I’m sure this was a hard review to write, Joan, but you handled it very well. I think I’ll give this one a pass.
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It was a hard review to write. The book could have been so much better with a good edit.
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That’s too bad about the repetition, Joan. Delores is a horrible person and I hope karma takes care of her, but at least the novel ended on a positive note.
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I couldn’t believe how Delores treated her husband. (There is a twist at the end, but I won’t give anything away for those who see this review and might want to read the story.) I did like the positive ending. Some times we just need a “feel good” story.
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I’ve noticed that not all traditional publishers put a lot of effort into the details, Joan. They proofread and let the books fly. It’s too bad when there are enough glitchy things to become a distraction. Otherwise, the book sounds quite good. I hope the author/publisher takes your review seriously. Thanks for the review!
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With the onset of self-publishing, I’ve seen a decline in the quality of traditionally published books. The publishing companies had to cut expenses somewhere, unfortunately a lot of content editors were victims. Thanks for stopping by, Diana.
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🙂
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It sounds as if the book has been let down by lack of editing. Thanks, Joan!
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It was, Olga. If not for that…
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A pity about the poor writing, Joan. This story sounds lovely other wise. I hope you are well and had a good Thanksgiving.
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Yes… I sympathise! I have also noticed a sharp decline in the quality of the writing in traditionally published books which is a real shame. I applaud your patience – I would have DNF’d this one miles before the end.
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Believe me, it was hard not to!
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