Ahoti: A Story of Tamar by Miriam Feinberg Vamosh and Eva Marie Everson

Book cover for Ahoti: A Story of Tamar shows close up of one half of a green-eyed woman's face


Ahoti: A Story of Tamar
Series: Standalone
Publisher: Paraclete Press (May 14, 2024)

Review by Mae Clair

Ahoti in Hebrew is translated as “my sister.” This is the story of Tamar, daughter of King David. If you’re familiar with the Old Testament, you know that Tamar was the sister of Absalom, the half-sister of Amnon. The Bible tells us that “Amnon became so obsessed with his sister Tamar that he made himself ill.” (2 Samuel 13:2a NIV). This obsession eventually led to an incestuous assault, after which “Amnon hated her with intense hatred. In fact, he hated her more than he had loved her.“ (2 Samuel 13: 15a NIV).

When David fails to discipline Amnon for Tamar’s violation, Absalom takes her into his own home. The Bible sheds no further light on what becomes of Tamar, though we do learn after a period of two years, Absalom kills Amnon in revenge, setting the stage for an unrepairable rift with his father that will ultimately result in a divided kingdom and Absalom’s death.

No spoilers there if you know the Biblical account of how David’s family implodes. I’ve always mourned Tamar, wondering what became of her, horrified by how her father failed to defend her. This book explores her life from the time of the assault through the decades that follow, leading up to Solomon’s accession to the throne of Israel. According to the Authors’ Note in the back of the book, the content (though fictional) is based on a book mentioned in the Bible (I Chronicles 29:29) that further documented several Biblical figures, including Tamar.

I’m a fan of Biblical fiction, especially stories set in the Old Testament, and King David is a personal favorite of mine. There is no question this great leader was flawed and failed in many ways as both King and father. Perhaps those grievous failures are what make him so relatable. Throughout his tumultuous life, however, his devotion to God never wavered.

While David is more of a peripheral figure in this story, I still found myself struggling with the way he is presented. All the gloss is gone, the man remains.

On the flip side, this is Tamar’s story as it should be. Almost immediately the reader is dumped into her assault and shame (the authors handled the attack with minimal description, nothing remotely graphic). While I felt for Tamar—mourned with her—and hated how she was treated by her family and her own people, the beginning of the book didn’t grab me like I thought it would. It took a good 40% before I was truly invested. By that time, Tamar had started to emerge from a cocoon, becoming a character who felt three-dimensional.

Forced to make her way beyond Jerusalem, guided only by the advice of a few loyal counselors, and a single servant/mother-figure, her journey is one of courage and change. Her pampered life as a healer in her father’s palace is long past.


… he gestured vaguely toward a few tattered lean-tos as he directed larger families and wealthier travelers to more spacious accommodations in another part of the camp. What must he think of me, a haggard and sullen woman traveling alone? Would he be surprised to know that I was a daughter—the daughter­­­­—of a king?

Ahoti: A Story of Tamar
By Miriam Feinberg Vamosh and Eva Marie Everson


While I found this book slow to get started, the second half kept me enthralled. I admire the authors for their attention to Biblical truths, and the amount of research that surely played a larger part in this story. You may need to stick with this book, but the journey is one I recommend taking.

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23 thoughts on “Ahoti: A Story of Tamar by Miriam Feinberg Vamosh and Eva Marie Everson

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        1. And we know there are going to be plenty of potholes in the course of life, LOL.

          That’s awesome you’re doing a chronological reading of the Bible. I did my first chronological last year (always read Genesis to Revelation in the past), and wow–talk about an eye opener! It really brought the Bible to life in a way I had not experienced before.

          Thanks for sharing and happy reading!

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  1. Tamar’s brief story in the Bible torments me. The poor woman! She is the perfect subject for a Biblical fiction book, kudos to Vamosh an Everson. The model’s pose/image on the cover makes Tamar look strong and determined. I’m super curious about the story. Tempting review, Mae, thank you!

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    1. I’m glad I’ve tempted you with the review, Priscilla. Like you, I’ve always been tormented by Tamar’s story (her and poor Dinah). The Tamar in this book was definitely strong and determined. The authors did an excellent job in defining her character and life circumstances.

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    1. I’m right there with you regarding that broken heart, Staci.

      Yeah, the book did start slow (at least for me) even though it immediately drops the reader into her assault. But wow, did it pick up and finish with a bang!

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    1. Hi, Denise. It’s so sad that women weren’t really “seen” by society in Biblical times. I love that God saw Tamar, even when her father and brothers failed her.
      The book was a bit slow to get going, but the last half really made up for it. I’m so glad I kept reading.

      Thanks for visiting!

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  2. Those times weren’t kind to women and Tamar’s “vanishing” made me sad. How interesting to have a fictionalized story about what happened during that time. I’m glad the book eventually caught your attention, Mae. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.

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    1. I definitely agree about Tamar’s “vanishing,” Diana. I wanted to know what became of her (the same way I wanted to know what became of Jacob’s daughter, Dinah). Fortunately, there are talented authors out there who have addressed both these stories. A little slow at the start, this was nonetheless a compelling book about a determined woman.
      Thanks for visiting today!

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  3. Tamar’s story was a sad one. I read it again this summer. King David, a man after God’s own heart, certainly had his flaws and disciplining his children was one of them. I always felt sorry for Tamar.

    Thanks for sharing your thoughts on this book, Mae.

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    1. Hi, Joan. I agree with everything you said, both about Tamar and about David. Yet another example of how God uses flawed and broken individuals. Tamar’s story might not play out in the pages of the Bible, but I do believe God provided for her and blessed her.

      The authors put a good ending on her story, and I was glad to know much of their research came from historical text!

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  4. This sounds like a fascinating read. I don’t mind a slow start if the payoff is worth it, and it sounds like this book will provide that. It’s always best for me to know that in advance otherwise, I might put it down. I’m not one of those readers who believes they must finish the book. I believe it’s the authors job to make want to keep reading. I read Everson’s The Christmas Ornament last December and really enjoyed her story. I’ll be sure to check this one out.

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    1. Hi, Kelly. I had never read either of these authors before, so in that respect, it was a new experience for me. I’ll look into The Christmas Ornament, based on your recommendation.

      I’m of the same opinion that I don’t need to finish a book if it doesn’t work for me. I’ve been known to stick with a few that didn’t grab me out of the gate, and others I’ve abandoned after a few chapters. In this case, I’m really glad I stuck with the story!

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